Whirr,
Whizzz
Screams of virulent laughter
fill earthly aching ears
while lights bedazzle
Glossy faces
that shine on a high
of cotton candy dreams
and adrenaline peaks
***
Our trip to the fair today
was inspiration for
If you think that you can craft a Sunday 160
only using 160 characters (including spaces) go visit him and give it a try.
only using 160 characters (including spaces) go visit him and give it a try.
Those are some pretty darn happy faces. Love your first go at a Sunday 160. You make me feel the ride and the fun. Thanks for playing.
ReplyDeleteI must agree with Monkey Man...those are some pretty darn happy faces! They're adorable!
ReplyDeleteGreat Sunday 160, dear lady!
Wheeeeeeeeeeeeee!
Sound like you had a wonderful weekend!
I think they had a little bit of fun
ReplyDeletejust a smidgen ;)
kkrige
ReplyDeleteI have been gone all day, so sorry for the late response,
but the "Best" has been saved for the last, and this is nicest 160 I have read, actually for any short poem standard it is really a lovely poem. With the nicest photo and glossy faces and Screams of virulent laughter I can hear it from here in Oregon.
Cheers,
Joanny
sounds like you had a wonderful day..bet the littles had fun...nice 160 k....
ReplyDeleteTheir faces speak to us!
ReplyDeletesomething fishy
And do get aboard the Poetry Train every Monday mornings and thereafter and post any of your works!!
Thank you Joanny. I was wondering if any of the carnies had ear plugs as we wandered along! haha. It really is a delightful cacophony of noise, but after ten days, I would think they would be done with it.
ReplyDelete* you know it Brian. I was absolutely exhausted though. I am still pooped!
ReplyDeleteHi Gautami tripathy. Nice to meet you here. I will go check out the train. Thanks for the invite and popping in.
ReplyDeletewhat a fun post.
ReplyDeletelove to see the kids smile!
They had a blast that day Jingle! Thanks for popping by
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