Wednesday, November 24, 2010

An Ode to my Love

Perhaps it is the wine that tickles me,
but I envisage thee
and my heart swells.

My lips quiver with delight.
Ah, the words; what a plight!
The smile is all I can provide.

The sun leaves my view,
although it has barely touched you,
and I am a day closer to love.

A hug from your name,
No other is the same.
I ache with anticipation.

I must fill my glass
to make the night pass
and make my dreams a reality.

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Here is a taste 
of juvenile love's poetry;
A verse written
while I wandered Europe's backpacking trails
and my heart dreamed
of a lover missed
back home in Canada

16 comments:

  1. ah...i can feel the pining...smiles.

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  2. 'Twas romantic fancy that filled my young heart, as my eyes feasted on Europe's finest histories.

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  3. Oh, I'm such a hopeful romantic, so while reading this poem...I found myself smiling and giddy.

    "The sun leaves my view,
    although it has barely touched you,
    and I am a day closer to love."

    Love that!

    I don't know whether you celebrate it, but I want to wish you and your family a Happy Thanksgiving Day tomorrow!

    And thank you for sharing yourself on this blog. It's been a pleasure getting to know you, Katherine!

    X

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  4. I am North of the border Ron, so Thanksgiving was a MONTH ago. You silly Americans are slow to the table.teehee

    In all seriousness though Ron, thank you so much for visiting again. You are a ray of sunshine that sweeps into my world with your silly bubbly enthusiasm for life and I LOVE it!
    ((((Ron))))
    (hugs right?!)
    xo

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  5. That was so sweet! Young love and poetry - they just belong together :)

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  6. kinda makes me wish to be young again....thanks for that...enjoyed the warmth it gave me...cheers pete

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  7. oh such a heartfelt poem...hope you sent it to him...?

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  8. Hi Pete. In a small way yes, but for the gifts that have been offered & the lessons learned, I think I belong right where I am.

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  9. Oh Claudia, you have me stumped. I was pretty good about sharing my words with him, as he was a great fan & appreciator, but I believe he was without a mailing address at the time. For the life of me, I cannot remember though. hmmm

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  10. Kkrige
    Well whenever words gets formed in love through heart, its not juvenile but matured ... I enjoyed this one..
    Your words ...
    'The sun leaves my view,
    although it has barely touched you,
    and I am a day closer to love.'
    were so beautiful and intense..
    I liked this one.. probably.. and only if you don't mind... the only juvenile thing that I did think it was are your two words in the verse from your heart were 'Envisage Thee'...
    thanks for sharing...

    ॐ नमः शिवाय
    Om Namah Shivaya
    Twitter: @VerseEveryDay
    Blog: http://shadowdancingwithmind.blogspot.com

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  11. You are kind Shashi. Thank you and I do not mind your comments at all. Part of the beauty of this venue is that we do open ourselves up to review. You offer constructive criticism and I welcome that as much as praise. It helps to make us all better writers to see our words through another's eyes.

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  12. With me also a lover of the outdoors, your poem jarred memories of my own backpacking trips and feeling so far away from a loved one. Thanks for sharing.

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