I love your song.
Sing to me. The trickling tune is magic.
I am mesmerized by your look,
your sound.
You hold joy and tears
and memories I know
and do not know.
Run on forever.
The sky fills with white puffs of cloud
slowly dancing down to your surface.
In slow motion, they descend
And surround you and I.
I am at peace with you.
You are serenity
and more.
The clouds know it and so do I.
We must all watch as the sun disappears.
The frogs give serenade,
but you continue your song;
a lullaby for time.
With a star signalling night
I depart from your song,
but hold it in my heart, as a dream.
My touch with a feeling I can never name.
I love you song.
Good night
clear and gentle stream
of my life.
~~~
This is a poem revisited for Jingles Poet's Rally. May nature touch your soul and glow.
When you talk like a conversation, it is very enlightening to read...I walk and talk the way you do here in the poem...
ReplyDeletepassionate and animated poem!
beautiful job!
I love this..especially the last line!
ReplyDeletethis is so beautiful ..... especially these lines...
ReplyDelete"The sky fills with white puffs of cloud
slowly dancing down to your surface.
In slow motion, they descend
And surround you and I."
amazingly good ...
some really great imagery in this one...i could walk by the stream for hours...
ReplyDeleteThank you all for your delightful appreciations. A stream is where I go when I need to spend some time with myself. Closest thing I can call to a meditation and renewal for soul.
ReplyDeleteBeautiful. There is something incredibly soothing about sitting by a body of running water and just listening and thinking. Love this.
ReplyDeleteI couldn't agree more suzicate. I could sit with you or wander with Brian or Jingle. :)
ReplyDeleteThis is really cool. I love the message.
ReplyDeleteA very sweet and lovely poem of nature. Makes me feel very peaceful.
ReplyDeletegreat message..lovely poem :)
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