I have caressed.
I have listened to the wind.
Our Karma did not hold.
I have laughed.
I have cried.
I have held your heavy hands.
Our Karma did not hold.
The elements,
yours and mine,
Do not match;
Such could have been foreseen?
I thrive in my natural element; water.
You survive in the air
as a cloud,
Constant.
I can be a part of you,
live in your cloud,
visit the air,
but not forever.
We separate and go our own ways.
I drop out of your skies,
Quench my thirst in my lake
And sigh.
Our experiences lie in memories.
So for now I release your hands.
I wipe away my tears
and check my laughter.
I will wait for the until.
The until of tomorrow.
Until we meet again
in different time and place.
Until we share again
and laugh, and cry, and be.
Until the skies call for me again
Where I will survive for an instant
And then become memory again.
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Go see Jingle for the Thursday Poet's Rally. She always has new poets in her roster and it is well worth a gander. Thanks for stopping by. Happy Thursday!
oh that was fabuous...those are raindrops on my cheeks...not tears you know...smiles.
ReplyDelete"drop out of your skies,
ReplyDeleteQuench my thirst in my lake
And sigh."
Beautiful lines. Enjoyed :)
A beautiful poem --- "until we meet again" love that line -- all of it flows so well together.
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This made me cry! So beautiful and touching...and you will meet again. Hugs.
ReplyDeleteBeautiful Poem! I love the rhythm of it!
ReplyDeletevery bouncy and happy one!
ReplyDeleteamazing poem.
cheers!
I really enjoyed this and could relate... remembering my first son who would have been eight last Tuesday.
ReplyDeletelovely poem there :)
ReplyDeleteenjoyed reading it :D
Im here from Jingle's Rally
you can view my poem at
http://megzone.wordpress.com/2010/05/27/thursday-poets-rally-penta-cinquains-seasons/
the imagery is beautiful...
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So sad and beautiful-- a vision of fate at one involved and detached. nicely done!
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Hugs, girl. That one took a bite out of my heart...
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Very nice.
ReplyDeleteThanks for sharing. I hope you will visit my sites:
Tim Keeton - A Writer's Tale
and
The Undead Poets Society
Rhyme on!
Tim Keeton
(Undead)Poet / Wizard / Teller-of-tales
A Week 19 Perfect Poet Award Winner
Absolutely beautiful!
ReplyDeleteThis poem brought tears to my eyes. But, tears of joy. Because you understand.
"Until the skies call for me again
Where I will survive for an instant
And then become memory again."
Thank you for sharing your wonderful gift!
How beautiful and well written. I love the easy flow of your words. Great job!
ReplyDeleteThank you...
ReplyDeleteHappy Thursday!
I have been so busy visiting all you beautiful people I have not had a chance to thank you all for popping in!
ReplyDelete* Brian (smiles) I know. Hugs and thanks
*dustus & Joanny thank you kindly
*SC oops, should put out a kleenex box here somewhere! Thanks. This was a poem I actually wrote years ago. I wrote this on the eve of a relationship's parting. We did meet and dance together again, but parted. It is a familiar dance that I will forever be tempted by, but cannot find enough of myself in
*cortnij nice to meet you! Thanks for visiting and appreciating
*Thanks Jingle
* hugs Elizabeth. Big hugs. Anniversaries are hard.
*Thanks megzone. I love yours too!
*Rajlakshmi it is nice to me you. Thanks for your kind words
*Mairmusic yes fate seems to have always held this relationship together from beginning to end and beyond
*Awww C. thank you always from the bottom of my heart
*Tim thanks. I checked out your sites and liked the play with poetry you spin. Rhyme on indeed
*Ron help yourself to the box by SC. There is lots to go around. Here hand me one too. For your comment hit me back. I understand. Thank you so much for stopping by
*Laura thank you so much for stopping in and being so kind. I liked your site as well
*Ji you poem was lovely today, in case I didn't say so.
Dropping out of the skies and into the lake. I like this imagery a lot.
ReplyDeleteNice poem. I expected the line "Our karma did not hold" to keep repeating. I liked it very much.
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