Tuesday, January 25, 2011

blood

Blood drips from aching 
heart that cannot see its pain
written on your face

16 comments:

  1. sometimes hard to admit what the heart feels even though others can see it...

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  2. Often we cannot even see it until it is shown to us by another. Peace to you Brian.

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  3. too true. and thanks for your good kind words left for me.

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  4. Why is it so, that even in pain, we cannot see what it does to others? Cannot see that they too see and feel our agony? Short and sweet, you take a heavy feeling and evoke it fluently through this form.

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  5. In your response to Brian's comment....

    "Often we cannot even see it until it is shown to us by another."

    You are SO RIGHT ON about that, Katherine!

    It's like looking into a mirror.

    FAB One Shot!

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  6. @Neva: :) I will take it that you like my haiku.

    @Kathew: It is sad that we cannot see the tree for the forest sometimes. It is a path only the individual can take though.

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  7. @cianphelan: Thank you so much for your kind words. It hurts me so to see friends in need. We all have our own paths to walk though, so I just play messenger along the way.

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  8. Ouch. So close to home for so many of us. Seeing how hurt some one is, or maybe even seeing how they can change things but knowing when not to intrude on their journey.

    What an impactful few words, Katherine!

    xoxo

    And it's so sweet how you still have the button I made you up. You'll get another some day, of course! I'll keep rotating the love.

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  9. I have been losing comments today left and right! Ack. My own fault (I will blame it on lack of sleep being up with my youngest and her latest ear infection), but I hate it when that happens. I had a nice response written for you Ron, but now I am just going to say thanks for stopping by. I am fading fast & am afeared that tonight I will be up again groan

    @Dearest Jannie thank you so much for your kind comments as well.

    But now I have to crawl into bed, as trying to be nice and visiting at blogs is not fair when I have nothing to offer. I had a lovely comment for Pattiken on her OneShot and it disappeared-poof! So poof to me too!

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  10. WOW! this took me by surprise, powerful and strong a very 'zen' quality is what I was referring too.

    cheers,
    joanny

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  11. @Joanny: cheers to you Joanny for stopping in. I cherish your comments always. Thank you dear lady.

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  12. Stunning, perfect work. Wish I'd written it (said in an admiring, non-jealous, friendly way).

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  13. @Steve: I will take that as a nice compliment Steve. I know you like your micro-pieces. Thanks for stopping by.

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  14. Simple, spare, and strong. Well done.

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  15. @Alice: Thank you. I feel like I am hitting stride with haiku as of late.

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